COMMENTS ~ PLEASE . . .

Ok ~ what is it "gonna" take . . . ?

Before a comment on me you make  . . . ?

A packet of crisps is that to cheap . . . ?

Before pen to paper you do leap" . . .

Rummaging ~ back of the sofa ~ is that too low . . . ?

To hear a comment ~ how far am I prepared to go . . . ?

So read my words and for me weep . . .

For I’m away ~ even a "Poet" needs its sleep . . .

So - I returned and to no avail . . .

Still no comments in my mail . . .

Should I quit while I’m ahead . . . ?

Or continue on with my thread . . . ?

Pen to paper ~ my head is clear . . .

While I await” ~ a comment so dear . . .

The packet of crisps” ~ given a miss” . . .

Not your idea then of gratifying bliss . . . ?

The back of the sofa” was a “No” show . . .

After what I found” ~ that cat has to go . . .

In my Shame ~ I’ve upped my game . . .

Soon I’m sure ~ I will find my fame” . . .

Putting me “Marbles” and “Elaccy” bands . . .

So neatly in a pile ~ within your hands . . .

Did I even rustle up with you ~ a token smile . . . ?

Am I trying hard enough with my wicked guile . . . ?

I’m trying hard ~ but without any gain ~ I’m at a loss . . .

I am fading fast ~ I’m losing with it ~ all my gloss” . . .

The comment box ~ with respect ~ can go to “Hell” . . .

It’s been vacant for such” a while” ~ It’s starting to smell . . .

“So” with peg on nose ~ the comment box I get to grips . . .

Gone are the greasy old papers ~ along with the chips . . .

Out with the non-existing “Accolades” ~ and in with the “Gin” . . .

If nothing else arrives now ~ At least I will be left with a “Grin” . . . : )

Indiana Shaw . . . *o*